Écrire une lettre qui raconte mes vacance

Hy,
I am writing you to tell you my holiday in England, it was great!
I visited a lot of things ...
As Buckingam Palace, I saw the queen of England!
I visited Stonehenge with menirs.
I went to see the round table of King Arthur in Winchester.
I visited the city of London, Picadilly Circus, all the shops but it is too expensive unfortunately ...
I saw the City of Manchester Stadium.
I spoke with English very nice.
I have so many things to tell you, and I hope we'll see you soon ...
And you? You had a good Holiday?

Je raconte des vacances en Angleterre... j'espere que sa ira.